Bài 4: Writing

Chào em, Poor turn-out = not many nha em.

Chào em, Với đề bài tự luận, em có thể tự viết và đưa lên đây, admin sẽ chữa giúp em nha.

Dear Mom, When I put pen to write on these lines, I think you will be very surprised. I want to say a lot of things to you but I don\\\'t know how to express my feelings, I have so many things to say to you, so today I can only write down my sincere feelings. I know you have made great sacrifices for us: your youth, your health and your time. Because of the mother\\\'s sacrifice, we can always live a prosperous life under her protection. Although I wasn\\\'t born into a well-off family, I have a mother and her love. Mom always saves money to take care of us to study, to take care of medicine when we are sick. Life no matter how difficult it is, always live with mother\\\'s love. I remember when I was a child, when I was sick, my mother was always there to comfort and care for me. Mom always encourages us to strive to have a good life and prove ourselves. No matter how busy , mom is always there and teaches us. Sometimes i disobey mom, and even argue with mom. At that time, I thought I was very wrong and wanted to apologize to my mother. I write this I probably won\\\\\\\'t post it. As time passed, these words faded with the years. But mom, my love for you is forever. I just want to tell you, you should take the time to take good care of yourself, mom. ĐÂY Ạ. MONG CÔ SỬA LỖI CHO EM Ạ

dạ sửa lỗi hộ em với ạ

Chào em, Em nên xác định rõ ai là người sẽ nhận bức thư này để bài viết của em có sự thống nhất trong cách xưng hô. Em tham khảo bài viết ad đã chỉnh sửa nha: Dear Mom, When I TAKE pen to write (BỎ ON) these lines, I THINK you WILL be very surprised. I want to say a lot of things to you but I don't know how to express my feelings. Today I can only write down my sincere feelings. I know you have made great sacrifices for us: your youth, your health and your time. Because of the mother's sacrifice, we can always live a prosperous life under her protection. Although I wasn't born into a well-off family, I have a GREAT mother and her love. YOU always save money to take care of us to study, to BUY medicine when we are sick. Life IS GREAT WHEN, no matter how difficult it is, WE CAN always live with OUR mother's love. I remember when I was a child, when I was sick, YOU WERE always there to comfort and care for me. YOU always encourage us to strive to have a good life and prove ourselves. No matter how busy YOU ARE, YOU ARE always there and teaches us. Sometimes I disobey YOU, and even argue with YOU. At that time, I thought I was very wrong and wanted to apologize to YOU. I write this BUT I probably won't post it. As time PASSES, these words WILL fade THROUGH years. But mom, my love for you is forever. I just want to tell you, you should take the time to take good care of yourself, mom.

Chào em, không cần em nhé, đây là mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn sử dụng P2 Câu gốc là I've just finished reading a long novel which was written by Arthur Hailey

Chào em, Không được nha, vì việc đã xảy ra trong quá khứ nên phải đổi thì

Chào em, Không được nha, vì việc đã xảy ra trong quá khứ nên phải để thì như câu trên