Bài 4: Writing

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Living in a smart city offers a multitude of benefits, from convenient transportation to easy access to essential services. On the other hand, a smart city can also pose a risk of personal data being exposed due to cyberattacks or privacy invasions, as these cities are often highly dependent on digital technology. Additionally, they can increase the cost of living and create social disparities if not managed properly. In summary, even though living in a smart city presents numerous advantages, it is essential to consider both the pros and cons and to ensure that such a city is developed and managed ethically to maximize its benefits and minimize its risks.

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One of the most memorable days that had such a strong impression on me is my first trip with my classmates when I was 12 years old.

After being announced that we would go on a trip to Cuc Phuong national park, all of us got super excited as it was the first time we had a long journey together. And that unforgettable day finally came.

We set off quite early at 5.30 a.m. We were very happy and sang together on the coach. The weather that day was perfect for a long trip: it was sunny and windy, and the air was pretty cool and comfortable. Three hours later, we reached the destination. Everyone felt a bit tired so we took a short break and had a light meal.

In the afternoon, it was time for us to explore the national park. But because of our excitement and curiosity, we ignored the tour guide’s warning and half of my class got lost in the forest including me. It was getting darker and we started to feel hungry and scared. We could only rely on the light from our mobile phone and could not call anyone because there was no reception here.

Our monitor still stayed calm and told us to stay together before someone might come to rescue. It was really smart of her to use a lighter to create a fire to signal. The rangers quickly recognized the signal and came to our place, so we were able to get out of the forest safely.

Seeing our teacher’s worried face, we really regretted being so disobedient. We apologized to her and promised that it would never happen the second time.

Although getting into trouble, I cannot deny that we had the chance to learn many valuable lessons we are not taught at school and that’s what makes this piece of memory more precious

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I have a lot of good friends who are always by my side. They are willing to help me whenever I need them. Anh is my best friend now. She is 17 and we have known each other since we started to study at high school. She is my classmate and sits next to me. She is beautiful with long black hair and clear brown eyes. She's got an oval and looks very gentle and cute. Moreover, she is a very lovely, caring and amazing girl. She is the person I always talk to and she listens to me all the time and gives me good advice. I feel that although life can be tough, it is great to have a best friend.

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Do hai tên có phần phát âm hơi giống nhau nên cô Hương nhầm lẫn chút! Em sửa lại giúp cô Hương thành "Michael" nhé!
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