Unit 5: Wonders of Vietnam - Writing (Extra Exercises)

Chào em,

Your email is well-written and includes all the required details. I made some adjustments for clarity and correctness:

Email:

Hey [...],

I hope you're well. I want to tell you about a place I'd love to visit – Ha Long Bay. The breathtaking limestone mountains and emerald-green waters make it look like something out of a dream. It's also home to many unique species. Ha Long Bay offers plenty of interesting activities, like exploring caves, swimming, sunbathing, sailing, visiting floating villages, and enjoying delicious food. Plus, I can take amazing photos there! I’m planning to visit next summer when the weather is perfect. I think it’ll be an unforgettable experience!

Looking forward to your response,

[...]

Suggested Edits Explanation:

- Changed "I want to tell an attraction" to "I want to tell you about a place" for clarity.
- Corrected "It is also home to a lot of species" to "It's also home to many unique species."
- Adjusted "Ha Long Bay have many different interesting things to do" to "Ha Long Bay offers plenty of interesting activities."
- Changed "I plan to visit next summer" to "I’m planning to visit next summer" for a more conversational tone.
With these small changes, your email reads more naturally. Great job!

Chào em, em tham khảo nhé
Vietnam has many beautiful natural wonders but one of the wonders that left an impression on me is Ha Long Bay. Ha Long Bay is a small bay on the west coast of the Gulf of Tonkin in the Northeastern Sea region of Vietnam. Although it is small, it is a very beautiful natural wonder. There are many large and small limestone islands here, with many different shapes. Sitting on the boat for a walk, visitors will feel excited about the clear blue water and the beautiful scenery around it. All blend together to create a beautiful picture of nature. In addition , Ha Long Bay is a place to help people relax , relax with the songs of birds in the sky . Great !

@Nguyễn Thị Thu Yếndạ em cảm ơn

Không có gì nha em.

Chào em, em tham khảo bài sau nhé
Projector had not been used in the classroom for study before 20 years ago. This facility makes the lessons more interesting, especially in natural science subjects including Physics, geography , chemistry,…, the scientific events are illustrated through videos, pictures, and sounds. Students are usually amazed at how things happen on the screen, and they understand clearly about the lessons. This huge screen helps children to focus more on the lessons and not feel boring as the traditional teaching method. Before this device is used, teachers meet difficult explaining and conveying the natural events to students. They must utilize pictures or draw on the board by chalks, which took time but not effective. In my opinion, using projector is a great change, saves time in teaching and keep children engaged. It also provides more information in an effective and detailed way. Besides, this change will be continued thanks to the development of technology and Internet.

@Nguyễn Thị Thu Yếndạ em cảm ơn

Không có gì nha em.